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Marrok Koroto

Post  Crimson Viper on Sun Feb 27, 2011 1:02 am

Character Description

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Basic Information

Profile Name: Crimson Viper
Character Name: Marrok Koroto
Gender: Male
Age: 600
Height: 6'3
Weight: 153
Personality: Sort of psychotic, and almost always has a twitch. The only time the twitch goes away is when he has been speaking to his leader for a little bit, or when he is in an intense fight.
Loves: Hearing muscles/ or even bones crack
Likes: watching people/ including himself burn or bleed.
Dislikes: Anyone who apposes his leader

Basic Info Continued

Rank: Espada # 1
Position: Rakdos (The king)

Weapons: Zanpakuto-
Name: Akuma Homura/(Demon flame)
Words to activate: "Let them suffer and bun the heavens!"
Description: Non-released it appears to be an almost average katana being longer with the hilt of the blade at 15 inches. When released the flat of the blade becomes wider and the edge sharper. A dragon appears to be etched into the blade with pitch black eyes. His hierro becomes much more distinctive as a flame from the blade covers most of his visible skin and deeply burns in to its more refined iron like under layer of skin. The parts that where burned but not to the hierro forms various parts of the dragon on his blade. (Ie. the head, a claw the body.) most of his robe would fall and hang around his waist showing the dark dragon parts covering his upper body. In this stage and later stages his eyes lose there iris and the pupil gets small. Most would say they where as small as a grain of sand or two. He says thats his warning to his victims he is ready to attack.

Ability1- Kanda - The eyes of the dragon both on Marroks body and on his sword with both get a small glow of red in them as he slashes his sword shooting out a wave much like a bala small but fast. The wave of spiritual pressure will leave a second degree burn. Cost 20 Reiatsu.

Ability2- Katsuya- Marrok will shove the tip of his blade into the ground about two inches. A fire as large as them will engulf anyone he chooses and it will help them regenerate any lost blood, and seal up open wounds. The wounds will be sealed up with a burn mark, Can not be used to heal any broken or missing body parts. 25 Reiatsu

Ability3- Arrengeddon- Marrok will stick Akuma's blade half way into the ground and create a large plasma like burning beam of spirit pressure from under any person he so chooses. There is a slight warning were the beam will be. Just before the beam appears the temperature within the diameter of where the beam is going to be will increase dramatically and anyone outside the beams diameter can see a slight distortion of the air because of the intense heat. 30 Reiatsu

History

Marrok always found himself enjoying the pain of others, and himself a little too much. Killing wak soulreaper was just a sport to him and torturing them was just his way of reminding himself how weak they truly where. During the Great Shinigami War he found himself fighting under a fellow Arrancar named Rakdos who quickly rose through the ranks of the espada. Marrok quickly understood Rakdos was his ticket to his ultimate goal, the complete annihilation of the soul reapers. Since the Great Shinigami War all of Marroks dreams either involved crushing the soul reapers into dust like they did before, or torturing then on the orders of his leader Rakdos's.

Character Stats

Level: 90
Reiatsu: 205
Speed: 180
Strength: 165

Techniques

Cero (and similar techniques)
Cero (Tier 4)
Grand Ray Cero (Tier 4)
Bala (Tier 4)
Bala Barrage ( Tier 4)
Cero Doble (Tier 2)
Unarmed Techniques
Hierro (Tier 4)
Sonído (Tier 4)
Sword Techniques and Styles
Name -- 1000 strikes (Unarmed style)
Rank -- (Tier 3)
Cost -- 10 (to get Reiatsu flowing) + 3 for upkeep.
Description -- Marrok and his quick attacks, and running speed allow and a very rapid succession. While in this style of fighting Most of his attacks seem as if he has multiple hands/ feet coming from his arms and legs when he strikes.
Name -- 1000 strikes. Palm (Attack)
Rank -- (Tier 3)
Requirements -- 1000 strike (Unarmed style)
Cost -- 10
Description -- Marrok and his quick attacks, and running speed allow him to run circles arround his opponent as he looks of the opening he want's. when he finds it he lunges forward attacking with a few quick open palmed strikes. The strikes appear to be made with a thousand palms at one time, and feels like it too. It is not a lethal attack but it can knock the wind out of anyone under seat 5.
Name -- 1000 strikes. Kick (Attack)
Rank -- (Tier 3)
Requirements -- 1000 strike (Unarmed style)
Cost -- 10
Description -- Marrok and his quick attacks, and running speed allow him to run circles arround his opponent as he looks of the opening he want's. when he finds it he lunges forward attacking with two quick, and powerful kicks one high and one low. The kicks appear to be a thousand feet all kicking down his opponents body at one time, and feels just as bad. It is not a lethal attack but it can knock out of anyone under seat 5 through its sheer force and speed.
Name -- Burning dragon's perception
Rank -- (Tier 4)
Cost -- 20
Requirements -- 1000 strikes (Unarmed style) zanpakuto released but not in a battle ready position
Description -- Marrok uses his Reiatsu to create a giant dragon which is inside a circle. Anything within the circle lets off little sparks which make the burns on Marroks body glow the glowing burn mark is the one facing which direction the movement came from. perception bubble last for five of Marroks posts.
Name -- Diamond dragon's perception
Rank -- (Tier 3)
Cost -- 10
Requirements -- 1000 strikes (Unarmed style)
Description -- Marrok uses his Reiatsu to create a giant dragon which is inside a circle. Anything within the circle lets off little sparks which gives a rough signal in Marroks brain on where the enemy is.
Name -- Blind Dragons Strike (Non-lethal)
Rank -- (Tier 4)
Cost -- 25
Requirements -- 1000 strikes (Unarmed style) Burning Dragons Perception. Sonido.
Description -- Seeing is a thing in the past for Marrok as the blind folds himself in anyway possible and uses his sonido and todash around the area within his Burning Dragons Perception the pain from the glow to locate his target. Most people begin to underestimate Marrok when he uses this technique because he can not directly see you. When you in his sight he gets in as close to you as possible and releases an upward elbow to his opponent sternum. It is not leathal but it will knock the wind out of them, and possibly be hard enough to knock them unconscious.
Name -- Burning Charge
Rank -- (Tier 4)
Cost -- 25
Requirements -- 1000 strikes (Unarmed style)
Description -- Marrok Begins focusing his Reiatsu to increase his speed for his next attack. (Takes up the post may do any other action after this one.) Certain attacks will need this charge to be done. charge last for next post only. +60 speed
Name -- Burned to blackness Dragons Strike
Rank -- (Tier 4)
Cost -- 25
Requirements -- 1000 strikes (Unarmed style) Burning Dragons Perception. Sonido. Burning charge
Description -- Seeing is a thing in the past for Marrok as the blind folds himself in anyway possible and uses his sonido and the speed boost from his burning charge to dash around the area within his Burning Dragons Perception. The minor pain from the glowing burns is used to locate his target. Most people begin to underestimate Marrok when he uses this technique because he can not directly see you. When you in his sight he gets in as close to you as possible using his full speed and releases an upward punch through his opponent ribcage. It is extremely lethal to anyone under the lieutenant. Most lieutenant's Will be unconscious. Only lieutenants who have achieved bankai and up could take the hit and stay conscious.

Name -- Fire demon slashing
Description -- This style of swordplay is used by mainly only by Marrow and some other fire Zanpakuto users. Keeping his blade level with his chest Marrok points the tip of his sword towards his opponent at all times. His slashed are often quick and rather long with a trail of fire following the blade. Fire will leave a mild burn unless near a major artery or vein. Then the burn will a little be more severe. The fire from the slashes often cause bleeding with the skin around the cut burnt to the point where the cut will not close up on its own.

Name -- Burnings crosses
Rank -- (Tier 4)
Cost -- 25 (for first three slashes) + 6 for each additional slash.
Description -- The dragon on his blade glows in a dark, all most black, purple color, and the rest of the blade catches on fire. Marrok then makes a few slashes sending out waves of fiery spirit pressure the same size as his sword in the directing he his facing. The name comes from the fact that at least two of the slashes make a cross.


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Re: Marrok Koroto

Post  Crimson Viper on Sun Feb 27, 2011 2:44 pm

would an arrancars release/ resurrection for there zanpakuto have and stat boosts?

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Re: Marrok Koroto

Post  Ryokou on Sun Feb 27, 2011 2:59 pm

I would like to point out that you can't start at level 90 or even level 80 unless you clear it with Itachi. You'd have to knock him down to 60 before anything and maybe even lower than that. I don't know if Itachi requires you to have a level 0 character first.
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Re: Marrok Koroto

Post  Crimson Viper on Sun Feb 27, 2011 3:02 pm

don't worry bro I was talking to him about it yesterday.
we had a conversation on it and he allowed me to make this guy

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Re: Marrok Koroto

Post  Ryokou on Sun Feb 27, 2011 3:10 pm

Ah, okay. This site is going to end up being top heavy though. There's only like one low level character.
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Post  Crimson Viper on Sun Feb 27, 2011 3:12 pm

well there can only be 10 really high level arrancars. and I am planning on asking Itachi a few things that will might help out

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Re: Marrok Koroto

Post  Itachi2pt0 on Sun Feb 27, 2011 7:30 pm

As a starting level 90 you cannot have Tier 5 Techniques. Also, resurrection form depends, you have 4 maximum slots to a lot stuff to. So you can have an increase in the 3 stats, then something else, 4 unique powers, 3 unique powers and a stat boost. That's why there are slots.
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Post  Crimson Viper on Sun Feb 27, 2011 7:37 pm

ok thank you I will take off or change my tier five tech's and add my fourth ability but i will pm you on my idea for the fourth slot before I put it in.

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Post  Itachi2pt0 on Sun Feb 27, 2011 7:41 pm

No no no, you don't have a 4th slot yet, you've got to train for that. The only 2 "characters" that start with 100 percent full abilities are the 2 leaders of the factions. You have 3
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Post  Crimson Viper on Sun Feb 27, 2011 7:45 pm

sorry i missed typed, what i men't was i will tell you my idea for my fourth slot. sorry about the confusion

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Re: Marrok Koroto

Post  Crimson Viper on Sun Feb 27, 2011 8:39 pm

there it is changed, and they can make fightings styles that do not require there sword right?

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Post  Itachi2pt0 on Sun Feb 27, 2011 9:36 pm

Arrancar yes Shinigami need to have unarmed in order to start with the technique
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Post  Crimson Viper on Mon Feb 28, 2011 4:50 pm

ok well am I approved or do i need to change something

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Post  Crimson Viper on Tue Mar 01, 2011 4:38 pm

do i need to change anything else?

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Post  Itachi2pt0 on Tue Mar 01, 2011 5:01 pm

Uh, you might want to get some more sword styles. You only have 2, which means that right now you can only make very basic attacks and also you have 11 more spots for techniques
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Post  Crimson Viper on Tue Mar 01, 2011 5:02 pm

I do? wow I will make more and some unarmed combat as well thank you for pointing that out

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Post  Itachi2pt0 on Tue Mar 01, 2011 5:06 pm

I'm still working on them. DO NOT QUESTION AUTHORITY *smack*

No, seriously Jinshin is getting more techniques as soon as Ny gets on, just didn't want Kyle to be bored and waiting.

Your character is approved except for the lack of jutsus. If you want to just RP without fighting, go ahead. But your character won't be fighting approved until you get more sword styles or custom cero's and stuff OR just take it as is.
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Post  Crimson Viper on Tue Mar 01, 2011 5:14 pm

ok well I will be making a special unarmed combat style for him and his release and once I create them I will take them like that. I am pretty sure

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Post  Itachi2pt0 on Tue Mar 01, 2011 5:15 pm

Well, then I'll wait on approving the rest of your character until I take a peak at those. You can RP, that's fine.
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Post  Crimson Viper on Tue Mar 01, 2011 5:17 pm

thank you but the only character there is yours and I would need an rp box which I am stumped when it comes to making them.

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Post  Itachi2pt0 on Tue Mar 01, 2011 5:39 pm

Marrok Koroto

TEXT TEXT TEXT TEXT TEXT TEXT TEXT
Mood: Calm
Condition: Healthy
Level: 90
Hit Points: 37• Speed: 180 • Strength: 165• Striking Speed: 255 • Reiatsu: 205/205
Technique Used:
None
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Post  Itachi2pt0 on Tue Mar 01, 2011 5:55 pm

shit, you might want the code huh

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Post  Crimson Viper on Tue Mar 01, 2011 5:57 pm

thank you and look over the unarmed techs i had made those might be it if they are ok.

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Post  Itachi2pt0 on Tue Mar 01, 2011 6:03 pm

If those are released form techs good to go.
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Post  Crimson Viper on Tue Mar 01, 2011 6:12 pm

thats the thing one tech has a stat boost and i need to know it is all ok how i put it, it has a purpose and the boost is only 1 turn.

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